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I slept all day because I was sick today. I have a fever. I also have a headache. I also have a cough. I want you to get well soon.
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I slept all day because I was sick. I have a fever, a headache, and a cough. I hope you get well soon. Alternative Version: I spent the day sleeping because I was feeling sick. I’ve got a fever, a headache, and a cough. I hope you feel better soon.
Short Tip: Instead of repeating “I also have”, try combining items into one sentence (e.g., “I have a fever, a headache, and a cough”). It sounds smoother and more natural. Advice on Natural Flow of English: To sound more natural, use "hope" instead of "want" when wishing for someone’s health to improve, as it conveys a more sincere and common sentiment. Also, try varying sentence structures to make your writing less repetitive.
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