李千金
I acquired this hobby when I was a child during the journeys that I made, I have grown a lot being open to different cultures, which punched me to this world When I went to Italy I tried local foods I had already eaten there I stayed at the monastery I was based in Fabriano they drove me to the airport They offered to catch me at the station The environment is fascinating They recommend to not face it There’s an intense illegal practices/gangues
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I acquired this hobby when I was a child during the journeys that I made, I have grown a lot by being open to different cultures, which punched me into this world When I went to Italy I tried local foods I had already eaten there I stayed at the monastery where I was based in Fabriano they drove me to the airport They offered to catch me at the station The environment is fascinating They recommend not face it There’s an intense illegal practices/gangues
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I acquired this hobby when I was a child. During the journeys that I made, I have grown a lot . being open to different cultures, which punched me to this world I don't understand this. 2 problems: it's a clause, not a complete sentence. 'Punched me to this world' doesn't make sense. When I went to Italy I tried local foods. I had already eaten there. I stayed at the monastery. I was based in Fabriano. They drove me to the airport. They offered to picke me up/meet me, etc at the station The environment is fascinating. They recommend not facing it. There are intense illegal practices/gangues.
Remember to capitalize the first word and put a period/full stop at the end of every sentence. Mostly good other than that.
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