Jessica Garcia
I like to watch movies of marvel. From them, I learned about revenge. In each movie there are or is there someone who wants revenge. It always ends badly, they suffer and make suffer other people. I learned that revenge destroyed not just someone it destroyed you too. In the movie of civil war, a doctor who wanted to revenge of iron man made captain america and iron man fight with each other for revenge and disagree, that was about to destroyed each other. He also killed black panter's father, and he was about to kill the doctor when he released what revenge does. He did not kill the doctor, he learnt the lesson, and captain america and iron man too.
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I like to watch Marvel movies. From them, I learned about revenge. In each movie there is someone who wants revenge. It always ends badly, they suffer and make other people suffer. I learned that revenge destroys not just someone else, it destroys you too. In the movie Civil War, a doctor who wanted to get revenge on Iron Man made Captain America and Iron Man fight each other. They almost destroyed each other. He also killed Black Panther's father, who was about to kill the doctor when he realized what revenge does. He did not kill the doctor, he learnt the lesson, and Captain America and Iron Man did, too.
Good work! The only part that I think was a little confusing was the end of the fourth paragraph. I wasn't completely sure what you meant by "fight with each other for revenge and disagree, that was about to destroyed each other," so I had to make a guess about what you meant. Otherwise it's just small things, like capitalizing the names of characters and movies.
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I like to watch Marvel movies. From them, I learned about revenge. In each movie there is there someone who wants revenge. It always ends badly, they suffer and make other people suffer. I learned that revenge destroys not just someone else, it destroys you too. In the movie about civil war, a doctor who wanted to take revenge on iron man made captain america and iron man fight with each other for revenge and conflict, they were about to destroy each other. He also killed black panter's father, and he was about to kill the doctor when he realized what revenge does. He did not kill the doctor, he learnt the lesson, and captain america and iron man did too.
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