July zhang
Yes, I think my country China is one of the safest places for travelers. Travelers can go out for fun or night snacks after midnight without worrying about their safety on streets, cameras are everywhere which can be seen as an E-police. There are more and more well-equipped tourist sites nowadays which can ensure travelers convenience and considerate services. As a traveler, I think we can't expect a perfect place to go to, but try to be vigilant always when we are at a strange place.
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Yes, I think my country, China, is one of the safest places in the world for travelers. Travelers can enjoy the nightlife or grab a bite to eat after midnight without worrying about their safety on the streets. There are CCTV cameras everywhere which help to make people feel safe. There are more and more well-equipped tourist attractions nowadays which can make a travelers visit very convenient and comfortable. As a traveler, I think we can't expect a holiday destination to be perfect, all we can do is try to be vigilant when we are visiting somewhere new.
Hi July! You have written an excellent answer. When I correct a student's work what I always try to do is to refrase the work with more common and natural sounding collocations. I will list the new and useful collocations below: the best in the world; enjoy the nightlife; grab a bite to eat; CCTV cameras; tourist attractions; all we can do is...; visiting somehwere new. Great work!
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Yes, I think my country China is one of the safest places for travelers. Travelers /They can go out to enjoy themselves /[for fun] or for [night] snacks after midnight without worrying about their safety [on streets]. Cameras are everywhere, which can be seen as an E-police. There are more (and more) well-equipped tourist *sites nowadays, which can ensure travelers' convenience and provide services. As a traveler, I think we can't expect a place to be perfect, but we should try to be vigilant when we are at a strange place.
* it's not clear if you mean locations visited or websites, but your statement may apply to both.
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Yes, I think my country, China, is one of the safest places for travelers. Travelers can go out for fun or light snacks after midnight without worrying about their safety on the streets. Cameras are everywhere, and can be seen as a form of E-police. There are more and more well-equipped tourist sites nowadays, which will ensure convenience and good service. As a traveler, I think we can't expect anything to be perfect, but we always try to be vigilant when we are in a strange place.
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