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Sofia
Hello every one,
Can we correct the test below?
I’m Internal Sales in a Banck.
Leasing is my Business.
I work with four external Sales.
They recherce new opportunities of business, and I management the operations process.
In my job is important balance business and regulation’s banck.
I start my work at alf past eight.
My first attivity is reading the email.
Then I wrhiting email to clients or supplire.
Every day I do different meating with others Offices of my banck, the topic is regular the Operations Process.
Often I do call with clients and supplier for new business opprptunity.
I like my job beacause in challenging.
I dislike for the complex banking regulation.
Thanks for the attentions,have a good day!
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I work in the Internal Sales in a Bank.
Leasing is my Business. I work with four external sales. They create new opportunities of business, and I manage the operations process. It is important in my job to balance business and regulation’s bank. I start my work at half past eight. My first activity is reading the email. Then I write email to clients
or supplier. Every day I do different meetings with other offices of my bank regarding the regular topic of Operations Process. Often I do call with clients and supplier for new business opportunity. I like my job beacause it’s challenging. I dislike it because of the complex banking regulation.
Thanks for the attention,have a good day!
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Hello every one, Can we correct the test below? I’m Internal Sales in a Banck.
Leasing is my Business. I work with four external Sales. They recherce new
opportunities of business, and I management the operations process. In my job is
important balance business and regulation’s banck. I start my work at alf past
eight. My first attivity is reading the email. Then I wrhiting email to clients
or supplire. Every day I do different meating with others Offices of my banck,
the topic is regular the Operations Process. Often I do call with clients and
supplier for new business opprptunity. I like my job beacause in challenging. I
dislike for the complex banking regulation. Thanks for the attentions,have a
good day!
Hi Sofia
Nice text!
I'm in internal sales in a bank.
They find/ research new opportunities for business and regulations of the bank.
I manage the operations process. İt's important in my job to balance the business and the regulations of the bank.
I start work at half past eight. My first task is reading my emails. Then I write emails to clients or suppliers.
Every day I have different meetings with other offices in the bank. Usually the topic of meetings is the operations process.
I often call clients and supplies for new business opportunities.
I like my job because it's challenging but I dislike the complex banking regulations.
Thanks for your time.
Have a good day!
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Hello every one,
Can we correct the test below?
I work in internal sales in a bank.
Leasing is my business.
I work with four external sales (clients?).
They research new business opportunities, and I management the operations process.
In my job it is important to balance business and bank regulations.
I start my work at half past eight.
My first activity is reading email.
Then I write email to clients or suppliers.
Every day I have/attend/go to different meetings with others offices of my bank, about the regular the operations process.
Often I do calls with clients and suppliers for new business opportunities.
I like my job beacause it is challenging.
I dislike dealing with the complex banking regulations.
Thanks for the attention, have a good day!
Remember that only proper nouns are capitalized, so "I work at a bank . . . " or "I work at Supergreat Bank."
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Sofia
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