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Molly
Today, the weather is much cooler. It can be said that it is becoming autumn then winter now. I haven't run for donkey's years and now I really want to try again.
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Today, the weather is much cooler. It can be said that it is becoming autumn then winter now. I haven't run for donkey's years and now I really want to try again. I never heard of "donkey's years" before. I do not understand your second sentence. Could you explain it to me?
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Today, the weather is much cooler. It can be said that it is becoming autumn then winter now. I haven't run for donkey's years and now I really want to try again. Well done for DONKEY’S EARS! A fantastic expression! No corrections needed although ‘it can be said’ is very formal. We’d probably say something like ‘it’s really starting to feel like autumn’
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Today, the weather is much cooler. It can be said that it is becoming autumn then winter now. I haven't run for donkey's years and now I really want to try again.
Well-written, but just to nitpick towards perfection: "it is becoming autumn then winter now" sounds a bit clunky to me. "It is becoming autumn now then winter will soon follow" is an alternative. I agree with the other corrector about "it can be said" sounding formal but it's all good. If it's too cold then run faster! (maybe)
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المهارات اللغوية
الصينية (المندرية), الإنجليزية, الفرنسية, اليابانية, الكورية, الفيتنامية
لغة التعلّم
الصينية (المندرية), الإنجليزية, الفرنسية, اليابانية, الكورية