It's rainy and chilly outside these days. Because of the effect of the storm, it rains heavily all day. So I just stay at home, listen to acoustic songs and lay in bed with my phone.

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It's rainy and chilly outside these days. Because of the effect of the storm, it rains heavily all day. So I just stay home, listen to acoustic songs, and lay in bed with my phone.

This is a well constructed sentence. I didn't see any major errors. 😊 I removed "at" from "stay at home" because it sounds more natural to say "stay home".

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