Ei Ei shwe zin
Looking back, it was really embarrassing. It was a day I can never forget and this memory has sticked with me for a long time. I was returning to my classroom after I had bought a cup of noodle soup. There was a shower of rain and the roads were slippery. I slipped and fell on the ground. The noodles that I bought scattered around the road . I also got a bruise on my knee. Everyone was looking and laughing at me. I was very happy to get their attention. I picked myself up and ran to the toilet. I felt a little upset at that time but , now it's a ridiculous experience for me. If you notice the mistakes, please correct me?
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It's a nice text. "This memory has STUCK with me for a long time" "...scattered OVER the road" And I'm confused as to why you were happy to get their attention, because the rest of the text implies that you were embarrassed.
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