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Today, I went to Korean restaurant for dinner after club that I'm belonging. It was first time I went. I ate Korean cold noodle. And I drunk alcohol. Then I'm on the way back home. I have to do my assignments. I'm so sleepy now. But I'll do my best to finish my assignment.
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Today, after my club meeting, I went to a Korean restaurant for my dinner. It was my very first time at this restaurant. Having eaten the Korean cold noodle, I drank some alcohol. I then went home to complete my assignments. However I feel so sleepy now. Nevertheless I' shall do my very best to finish my assignment.
Just some improvement pointers to make it flow better.
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Today, I dined at a Korean restaurant after attending a club that I belong to. It was my first time going there. I ate Korean cold noodles and I drank alcohol. Then I went back home to do my assignments. I'm so sleepy now, but I'll do my best to finish my homework.
Good structure and interesting story! Try to avoid starting a sentence with "and" or "but." Keep it up!
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