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Une rencontre
Le samedi après-midi, je m’étais promenée avec mon chien Snuffel dans le parc.
C’était une bonne journée, parce qu’il n’y avait pas des nuages.
Tout à coup, je voyais une copine, Jessica, avec son chien Luca qui je n’ai pas vu déjà 3 mois.
Elle portait un teeshirt jaune que je l’avait donnée pour son anniversaire et un short noir.
Nous continuions promener ensemble et commencions parler de dernier 3 mois, mais notre chiens ne se fréquentaient pas bien.
Luca commençait d’aboyer devant Snuffel, bien que Snuffel est trop grande que Luca.
Heureusement, Jessica avait une balle avec laquelle Luca commençait de jouer et il s’arrêtait d’aboyer.
Mais Luca n’aimerait pas encore Snuffel, par quoi il était égoïste.
Après quelques minutes, nous avons décidé de boire un soda. De sorte que notre chiens peuvent boire un peu de l’eau, parce que nous avions tout chaude.
Jessica et moi faisions une conversation, jusqu’au moment que nous nous avons étonné et nous nous taisions pour une minute.
Nous voyions Luca et Snuffel jouer ensemble !
Ce moment était la première fois qu’ils se conviennent.
Après nous avons bu notre sodas, nous décidions de retourner au parc.
De sorte que Luca et Snuffel pouvaient continuer de jouer ensemble avec la balle.
Ce faisait trop beau cette journée de retourner directement à la maison et c’était très agréable.
Merci pour corriger!
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pros and cons about living in the city
I will be grateful for your corrections :)
On the plus side, there are loads and loads of shops and shopping stores; therefore shopping and services of the most necessary kind are always close by.
This is practical because, instead of needing to go a long way to buy stuff, you are able to go only a small way. You can also go to the shops by bike or afoot.
In a city aren’t just shopping stores, but there are restaurants too; if you would like to go out for dinner.
Beside all the shopping and eating, you also have the chance to exercise.
If you are a sportive person, you don’t have to cover a long way to exercise at a club. So, in every city, there is a sport hall where you will have a bunch of possibilities to choose a sport you prefer. In the other hand, there are also people who prefer to work out by themselves. For those people, there are fitness centers in the neighborhood.
Another advantage is that there is a greater array of job opportunities; and if you aren’t still an adult, you have the opportunity to go to school nearby.
In addition you’ll have more social contacts, for the reason that there are a lot of activities.
Moreover if you want to relax, in every city there is a park, in order that you might enjoy a peaceful walk.
However, for every plus, there is a minus. A disadvantage is that crime is more alive in the city than in the country, because criminals realize that there are a lot of persons to steal from. Just out of the area where it is populous, criminals haven’t much notice. In other words, it is easier to steal here.
Another disadvantage is the traffic. The traffic is a bad thing because people cross the city to get to other areas in the city. As a result of this, it is all time in the day busy. This can be dangerous because there is more chance there can/might happen an accident; also that people will be late for occasions they want to go to.
Especially there is noise pollution. The factor which is most responsible for noise pollution are the events.
Another factor is that a city is densely populated. A lot of people are packed in a relative small area.
In conclusion, if you are looking for relaxation or a house with a yard, it might be hard to find. I think, city-life is something for people who have a bunch of hobbies or want to do a lot out-of-doors. It is a kind of busy life, therefore you won’t be very much at home. But if you like the silence and nature, I would advise you to choose the countryside.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
My native language is Dutch, and I am learning English.
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