Is there a grammatical error in the sentence? I posted it twice by mistake, please go to another thread: https://www.italki.com/question/356713

Is there a grammatical error in the sentence?

10 multiple choice questions about English usage The question are posted in the follwing links, there are maybe 1~3 sentences without errors. Thanks a lot! http://postimg.org/image/6cqppdy73/ http://postimg.org/image/3wthpa5i7/Using ABCD or corrent to show the answer is okay, thanks again.I have done them on my own but I am not sure whether they are correct or not. Thanks for your suggestions. My answer is C,D,B,(CORRECT),D,D,D,B,A,(CORRECT). Thank you very much.

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If you were given a lot of money when you get married..... If I were given enough money, I would choose to buy a house rather than use the money on my wedding ceremony. In my opinion, weddings do not need to be very fancy. This is because that the meaning of my wedding is not based on the ceremony, but based on me, and based on the person I love. As a result, there is no necessary to spend too much money on the wedding ceremony. Title: If you were given a lot of money when you get married, would you spend it to have a great wedding ceremony or to buy a house? Provide reasons. In contrast, buying a house would be more useful. First of all, my wife and I would have a new place to live, so we could enjoy the new environment and we wold feel happy everyday, thereby enhancing our relationship after marriage. On the second place, the house would benefit the growth of my future kids. Normally, they would be more likely to invite their classmates and friends to visit the house and have parties in it. This would develop the social skills of my children and I think it is of great importance to their all-around development. On the other hand, a house would be a necessity for my future family, but it seems quite difficult for me to buy a house, when I get married. It is partly because I would not have enough bank savings and partly because the price of a house might much higher than now. That is to say, If I could own a house, I would have little economic pressure. If I can choose to do other things with the money, I would donate part of them to some poor areas of my country. By doing this, the children there could receive better education and improve their living standards.

Animal tests Over the few decades,increasing numbers of animals are killed by people,especially scientists and researchers,for some experimental purposes.However,while these experiments have brought many benefits to human beings,it can be argued that these researches have resulted in more negative impacts than positive. It is evident that animal experiments have brought out many advances in some specific areas like medical industry.For example,people who unfortunately have severe diseases will have more chances to be cured,with the help of live-saving medicines,many of which are continuously developed by animal experiments.Therefore,we can not deny their contributions.

Part of my essay However,to much extent,there are actually couples of subjects which are of great significance to students' comprehensive development,regardless of their contributions to their job seeking.That is to say,concentrating on the curriculums‘ benefits to them merely in the workplace is too narrow an idea.For instance,if music lessons are ruled out by schools or some educational authorities,most of the children would potentially lose the chances to cultivate an eye for the beauty of some melodic masterpieces.Similarly,absence of PE lessons would definitely diminish the opportunities to build up their strength and enhance the abilities to coordinate every part of their bodies,which may gradually generate the students' alarming fitness levels.

Anyone knows the connotation of the following three-line love letter？ The love letter is in the web page:http://bbs.upc.edu.cn/thread-148280-1-1.html.Thank you for your help.