Does these sentence make sense? [That’s one small step for mankind, one giant leap for your baby.] 「人類にとっては小さな一歩だが、あなたの赤ちゃんにとっては偉大な一歩だ。」

Could you correct these English sentences for me? I think there is much differences in Men's and women's fashion. Men seek for strong preferences on clothes details. It would be important if it's comfortable when they put it on. They wouldn't like to get something new.If they get to like it, they must buy it again.Women are directly opposite.Trend is more important for women than comfortable.

Could you correct these English sentences for me? Hope all of you are doing well. I’m Michiyo Takahashi.I have been working for a designer of "AAA". Let me introduce ourselves to you. We are based in Tokyo, Japan. Most of staffs in our company are Japanese. One of us is from Taiwan.So please feel free to talk to us in Mandarin. Our English wouldn't be good but we will try to make a conversation with you if you reach us. I have been working as a fashion stylist focused on children products for a long time. The experiences help me to design of "AAA". I hope we can make products with both good functions and a amazing design.I believe that could help every moms and make their babies happy.