IELTS Topic Writing 2 Are these shows a good method of finding talented people or are they just entertainment? Nowadays, a lot of people who want to be popular apply for some TV shows to success in their life. In my opinion, TV shows would be kind of the ways to earn much money. I think that TV programs are one of the best methods to look for people who have great skills. The primary reason for this is that people have an opportunity to perform their amazing abilities on TV. Secondly, the right person may see people who have unique talents because the information with them would quickly spread in the world when they are able to express some judges and audiences. However, it is true that some TV channels are used by business to get a great deal of money. It seems that some TV companies need to have money because they have to pay highly guarantee for some judges. So some TV companies contract with some big companies to get get a lot of money instead pf displaying their advertisement. The other reason is that some judges may do unfair judgement. Although many people believe that they always do fair judgement, this problem sometimes happens. For only one big main reason is that some judges would be bought by someone. To sum up, there are some reasons why TV shows are easier than other ways and they are just business. Many people believe that people who become a famous on TV shows would success. However, it seems me that TV shows have been used as a tool to earn more money. Although it is second time to upload my writing, I think it is a complicate and not enough ideas, Please check my writing. Thank you so much for reading.

IELTS writing topic Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurant or canteens. Do you agree or disagree? I think that cooking and eating at home is better than eating out in restaurant or canteens. I agree with this sentence because of money, health and family relations. Firstly, in my experience, cooking and eating at home is cheaper than eating out in restaurant. When I eat in restaurant, I usually spend about $15. If I were cooking and eating at home, I would spend more cheaply than $15. Secondly, cooking and eating at home is healtier than eating out in restaurant. In my opinion, when people eat something in restaurant, they don't care about their health as they order something what they want. Thirdly, I think that all family have respectively meals which have individual taste as they can't eat in restaurant. However, I also think that eating out in restaurant is better cooking and eating at home because it is easy to eat food which is difference countries. I think that if I try to cook food which is difference countries, nobody knows how to cook it and about taste even if it is easy to get ingredients. In conclusion, cooking and eating at home and eating out in restaurant have advantages. But, as I mentioned before, cooking and eating at home is cheaper for money and health than eating out in restaurant. Furthermore, although eating out in restaurant is delicious as food is cooked by a professional chef, I think taht it is absolutely happy to cook and eat with family at home. That's why I agree with cooking and eating at home is better than eating out in restaurant completely. It's first time to write about IELTS topic for me. That's why I think it's not good. I was wondering if you guys could check my writing.