Can you help me with the gramatical mistakes of my essay? Hi everyone, I am doing a essay which is about Why being a kid is better than being a adult. I already have finished my first body parragraph thanks some Italki's users that help me. This is the draft of my second body parragraph: A captivating fact of being a kid is the almost non-existent of responsibilities. On the contrary, Adults have a lot of responsibilities. Your responsibilities as a kid were few and simple. You basically were forced by your mom to make your bed, sweep the floor and do dishes rarely. You have to admit kids live in a heaven, but they aren’t aware of this. On the other hand, Adults has a lot of responsibilities, for example, when you are an adult, you have to clean the house, tidy the rooms, mop the floor, make the beds, do the shopping, take the rubbish out, do the ironing, make breakfast, make lunch, make dinner and believe me. There are more chores to do. Thanks to spend your time reading and help me. :D

Can you help me with my body paragraph (essay) Hello everyone, Can you help me with the grammatical mistakes in my writing. Kids don’t have to be thinking about the cost of living by their owns because their parents have the duty of paying all Children’s needs, such as, clothing, nutrition, education, transportation ,a safe place where to live, entertainment needs, etc. They have everything and free. Unlike the kids, Adults keep in a constant pressure caused by the cost of living by your own. Isn’t easy living by your own because you must pay the water, electricity, gas, satellite television, internet, and phone bill. Moreover, you have to pay the rent, buy clothing, food and don’t forget the transport. My essay is about why being a kid is better than being a adult. Thanks for reading my writing :D

Can you help me with my body parragraph (essay) ? This is my thesis statement: Being a kid is better than being an adult in terms of money, responsibility and time. This is my first body paragraph To begin with, Kids don’t have to work to get cash. On the contrary, Adults have to work if they want to get cash, for instance, all kids loves toys, but if they want one toy, they need cash, so they beg to their parents money and that is lovely because kids don’t have to stay 8-10 hours in an office working hard. On the other hand, if an adult want to buy, for example, a jacket or a new phone, they have to work during all week around 8-10 hours at day because without job, they can’t buy anything. Can you help me with the possible mistakes? Thanks :D

Can you help me with my introductory paragraph? Hello everybody, I'm doing a contrastive essay for my intermediate English class and I need some help. This is my introductory paragraph I remember the splendid days when I was a kid. Simply it was a wonderful experience which I would give anything in order to being a kid again instead of being an adult. I used to stay in my room all day playing Resident Evil 2 in my Psone and when I was bored, I went out to the park to spend time with the other kids and it was funny because you never know what would happen. Being a kid is fantastic while being a forlorn and boring adult isn’t. Being a kid is better than being an adult in terms of money, responsibility and time. Is there something wrong? I mean the puntuation is wrong,the meaning is not clear, etc. Thanks for spend your time in my question.