Translated a cute story from a book. Is it correct? The story: 娃娃抓蛤蟆 小河流水哗哗哗， 来了一胖娃娃， 抓了八只大蛤蟆。 游来一群小肥鸭， 见了蛤蟆叫嘎嘎。 Boy catches frogs. The water of the little stream rushes by, (when) a little fat child came by, (and) grabbed eight big frogs! A group of little fat ducks swims by, saw the frogs and said quack quack! I added some english words to make the story sound better is this still in line with the original story?