Essay about eating habit, please help!!! Hi guys, Please help me to correct my essay as follow, Many thanks! ^^ Q: Nowadays more and more children acquire unhealthy eating habits. Why is it happening? What can be done to solve this issue? A: It is true that eating habits of children are changing and becoming unhealthy. There are several reason lead to this problem and this should be resolved by both their parents and society. The modern lifestyle is the culprit of unhealthy eating habits. Firstly, increasing the number of fast food restaurant, these convenient foods are culprit of many health problems. These foods such as dried chicken, chips, snack, sweet candies which contain high fat, salt, sugar ingredients and less nutrients or fibre could cause more heath problem such as obesity, heart disease. Secondly, as a consequence of busy life, parents seem to let their kids watching TV frequently in the meal time, especially when children refuse to eat as a deal. This habit cause bad affects on digestion-related problems as well as their concentrate ability later. There are several way to control this situation, both from parents and government. For parents aspects, they should control the kind of food given for their children and limit amount of foods which contain a lot of fat. Equally important, parent should spend more time on cooking a healthy meal include more vegetable and less meat for their offspring. This also not only lead to a healthy and happy meals but also narrow the generation gap. In addition, for society aspects, this problem could be resolved by the effort from government and school. For instance, unhealthy junk food should be banned from school menus as well as government should promote a healthy diet and regular exercise and provide more information about healthy lifestyle and good eating patterns. In way of conclusion, I would restate my opinion that children are having more harmful habit in eating and parents and society should do some actions to deal with this problem.