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Question (ielts)
In the last 20 years there have been significant development in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
Answer:
The advancement of the information technology provides people with changes to their life over the past two decades, and it is hard to decide whether this trend is completely beneficial or harmful for the interests of the public. While I believe that the drawbacks of the Internet cannot be ignored, I would argue that advantages of this development are of great importance in the future.
On the one hand, the creation of new technology could bring tremendous convenience to citizens. For workers, it is helpful to increase productivity and efficiency, for updated online products including emails make communication easier, based on which they could make adjustments. What’s more, this new access to world could broaden people’s horizens. For example, while VR has already made it possible to touch and see a virtual world literally, its updates in the future may help people get to some scenic spots away from us without stepping outside.
On the other hand, there are potential defects with this extremely convenient way to information. With the help of IT, students could switch to the belief gradually that learning is needless anymore. After all, Google can tackle most problems for them in daily lives. In addition, criminal could take the advantage of IT to commit crimes. This is because information leakage online has made it possible for criminals to cheat netizens including stealing money or business secrets, while it is hard to predicate if the advancements of IT could lead to more leakage in the coming years.
In conclusion, although IT would indeed offer convenience to people, the negatives should be noted, and it would be better if these technologies could be improved based on these drawbacks.
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At best alternative medical methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
Question: (ielts)
Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Answer:
Alternative medicine is not new and pre-dates conventional medicine. There are concerns regarding the effectiveness of these methods. From my perspective, while we should rely on medicine to recover from diseases, alternative methods could be effective and safe as a helper to get healthier.
On the one hand, some alternative methods are ineffective and dangerous. Firstly, inappropriate attitudes towards medical technologies may lead to the choice of ineffective methods. For example, some people regard praying as the only way to cure diseases because of their religions or beliefs, resulting in patients getting worse. What’s more, there are some unethical companies who exaggerate the functions of their health care products and prevent patients from getting proper medical treatments for profits.
On the other hand, proper alternatives should be advocated for its obvious benefits to patients. Afer all, it is evident that medicines have side effects, and abusing could be completely possible to bring negative impacts to patients health. After necessary treatments, other recovery methods including healthy diets and exercise should be adopted to develop a good lifestyle and avoid illnesses. This would be a positive cycle for people; without it, the immunity of people may become worse and one day no medicine could be used to help them.
In conclusion, diseases should get properly treated by medicine, while people cannot cure diseases only relying on medicines without any consideration for its drawbacks. We should be able to choose adequate alternatives after medical treatment, and the combination of the two could be better for fitness.
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