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My Dream 2 It was a popular topic among my friends when I was young. Almost everyone wanted to be somebody, and it was easy for children to admire someone with a clear and impressive dream. I was the same. Under pressure from Chinese-style examinations, talking about dreams became one of my motivations to study. But over time, people didn’t talk about it as often. Not only do their dreams change, but they also realize that talking won't make their dreams reality. I had many different dreams as I grew older. In my early age, I wanted to become an astronaut. When a child starts to know more about the world, they are likely to be attracted to the unknown. The universe is full of mysteries and I was full of confidence to discover them. Another reason is that I can see people show high respect to scientists. At that time, I was very confused about the meaning of our lives. In my little head, for my life to be meaningful was the same to be remembered by people through history. Since it is hard for a child to know what is their favorite thing to do, I chose a profession which is highly recognized by the society. When I was a little older, I started listening to some western music, especially some rock and roll, and I felt extremely excited about it. It is a special feeling that I have never experienced before. Becoming a musician in a rock and roll band took place of my first dream. But at that time, I could not have a band right away. I was a high student which means I have to focus on my academic study first. I did many silly things for this dream. For example, I pretended to perform as a superstar and my bed was my stage sometimes. ------------ P.S. This is actually a speech. I gave myself a topic, say it without too much consideration, and record it. My boyfriend said, maybe there are not so many grammar mistakes but native speakers wont say it in this way. Even when they see this text, they will know I am a foreigner. My question to native speakers: if you were me, how would you say the content which I said above. You do not have to be too formal. Thank you very much if you can help me.

My Dream (First paragraph) It was a kind of popular topic among my friends when I was young. Almost everyone wanted to become somebody, and it is easy for children to admire someone if they have a clear and great dream. I was the same. In the pressure of all kinds of Chinese-style examinations, talking about dreams became one of my motivations to study hard. But over time, people didn’t talk about it as often. I think it is not only because people’s dreams change, but also more and more people realize that if they only talk about it, it couldn’t become reality. I have had many different dreams as I grow up. In my early age, my dream was to become an astronaut. When a child starts to know more about the world, they are much likely to be attracted to something unknown. Universe is full of mystery and I was full of confidence to find them out. ----------- P.S. This is actually a speech. I gave myself a topic, say it without too much consideration, and record it. This is first part of my speech. My boyfriend said, maybe there are not so many grammar mistakes but native speakers wont say it in this way. Even when they see this text, they will know I am a foreigner. My question to native speakers: if you were me, how would you say the content which I said above. You do not have to be too formal. Thank you very much if you can help me.