Need Corrections for a Short Story 3- Кенгуру Жёлтыи English Translation: The Yellow Kangaroo Gulya, the yellow kangaroo has many friends. She invited them all to eat ice cream together. When they arrived at the parlor, there was only banana ice cream. They ate so much ice cream that they could not leave out the door. They were stuck in the parlor forever. Russian Attempt: Кенгуру Жёлтыи Гуля, кенгуру жёлтыи у её много друзья. Она всё их предлагала на мороженое. Когда они прибывали в зал, там было толко мороженое с бананом. Они ели так много, что не вписывються через дверной проём. Вечно они в зал. Notes: This story is about a female kangaroo. Also, I wasn't sure if there was an equivalent to "ice cream parlor" in Russian. In corrections, please stick as close to the original English translation as you can. I really appreciate those who take the time. ~Kai

Need Corrections for a Short Story 2- Мистер Лгушка Встал Note: I have a lot of trouble with gender agreement. The story is about a male, adult frog but I have been told that frogs are feminine. Clarification needed. Also, notes on cases are appreciated. English: Mr. Frog Awakes After the party, when the green frog awoke, he saw birds flying above. He asked himself: "Where am I?" He swam across the lake. Across the lake was his cottage. His wife was waiting. She looked at her green husband and asked him "Why are you wearing a clown suit?" Translation attempt: Мистер Лгушка Встал После вечеринка, зелёная лгущка встала---Она увидела птици наверху. Она себя спросила: <<Где Я?>> Она плавала озеро. Через озеро был её коттедж. Её жена ждала. Жена видела в её зелёнии муж, потом она спросила: <<Почему носишь костюм клоуна?>>

Need corrections for a very short story- Пьяная лягушка English: Drunk Frog There was a green frog who liked to drink beer. He woke up late. He ran. He jumped over a pond. When he got to the party, he drank beer and laughed all night. Russian Draft: Пьяная лягушка Лягуша зелёная кто пиво нравится пить. Он проснулся поздно. Он бегал. Он прыгал через пруд. Когда лягуша прибывал на вечеринка, всю ночь он пил и смеялся. (Even editing one sentence is helpful. Adding explanations of edits are also helpful. Thanks!)