It's short.Could u help me? Thanks!:D The pie charts depict the factors for undergraduates and postgraduates choosing Parker University to study. It is noticeable that postgraduates and undergraduate consider the most on reputation of university, with the proportion of 42% and 35% respectively. 32% of postgraduates and 24% undergraduates choose Parker University for cost.

Could you help me correct mistakes? In addition, elderly may decrease the innovation of a society. By listening to older generation’s views, children may lose innovative spirits. Elder people’s living condition is different to today’s, some of them still maintain conservative regulations. If youth obey those rules, they will find that it will be hard for them to have their own ideas. While young generation is the future of a country, their innovative ability can help to promote the financial and cultural development. To summarize, although older people assisting new employees to address problems which can increase the productivity of society, the burden imposed on government finance and the restriction on social innovation should not be ignored.

it's very short! Please help me :D On the other hand, excessive older people can impose a burden on construction of society. It is obvious that individuals’ health condition decrease along with age, they need more healthcare than youth do. Generally, governments should take the responsibility to establish complete healthcare system. Large amount of money pouring into healthy services means that other significant aspects such as education, public facilities, transportation will gain less investigation. It has impose a great burden on government finance.

please help me correct this, thank u ! Video cameras have installed everywhere around the city these days. However, whether the trend will have negative influence on people’s privacy remains a controversial issue. I agree with the view that if CCTV cameras can ensure people’s safety and privacy, then this trend will have more positive effects on society. Firstly, it’s obvious that most thieves and robbers dare not commit crimes in public places. This is because CCTV footage plays a central role in providing evidence to prosecute the criminal. So that the streets will be safer for everyone. What this means is that street crimes could be reduced by increasing monitors in the city.

Please help me check this short one, thank u! In my view, education is essential to technology development, which is more needed in developing countries. Children are the future of a society, especially for these countries with poor technology and education. Free education will increase the number of educated people, who will invent new technique products. Then people will get better lives through working hard. In summary, developing countries can improve people's lives by providing free education. Of course, these countries will benefit from introducing advanced technology, too. However, education is more important. After all, if a country only introduce but not develop a technology, it does not solve the basic problem at all.

It's short! would you mind correcting my mistakes? Governments in developing countries should take top priority to people's basic need to improve people's life quality. However, what steps should they take have become a big problem in today's society. Some believe that advanced technology is essential for citizen's life quality. With the development of science and technology, people could have a convenient life. Online payment can reduce rates of crime; modernized public transport can solve the problem of traffic congestion; advanced medical equipment can save more people's lives, which are all because of new technology. Others think that offering free education is a more effective way to improve life quality. Education is the foundation of a society, which can demonstrate one country's soft power. Providing free education can increase the opportunity for children to gain knowledge; meanwhile give people motivation to fight for their life goals. Also, people will be more competitive in workplace and it will promote the rate of employment.

really short! could u help me? Admittedly, choosing a subject like computer science does useful for a young adult to find a job. Nowadays, the increasing number of technology companies demonstrates a trend that those students who study technology will have less employed competition because there are many positions which can be provided for them. However, if tons of youngsters all choose science or technology as majors, this advantage will be disappeared. To sum up, forcing a teenager to study a subject he does not like may cause psychological problem and excepting those “useful majors”, other majors can also bring benefits for humans in future, though those hot majors could help graduates find a job easier compared with other subjects.

Are there some errors in this essay? The heated topic that whether a student should be allowed to study a subject he likes is discussed by public with different perspectives. However, I support the side that a student should study the major he is interested in. Firstly, if the teenagers are forced to study a subject they do not like, they will not put any effort on learning it. Sometimes, youngsters do not know which majors are better for them to find a job, so they just do things by feelings. Their rebel psychology will lead them to do silly things such as being absent everyday and being careless about the courses. Secondly, not only the subjects like science and technology can be useful in the future. The subjects such as arts, literature and economy are as important as them. Students who choose to study arts could be musicians or artists and they can create many masterpieces for people to enjoy. It is necessary for people to pass the culture down to the next generation after decades and those masterpieces are the best recordings of our cultures.

appreciate your help! thanks! :D While the advantages of advertisements are quite obvious, we cannot neglect the negative points of it, such as the economic pressure and improper value of consumers. To begin with, advertisements lead to buyers` economic stress . Presenting with witty slogan, eye-catching pictures and flowery phrases, advertisements make people less content with what they have, which finally inspire them to buy more products and make the under stress economically. In addition, advertising sometimes mislead consumers with improper value. Advertisements tend to associate commodities with a high status in the purpose of earn more money, which hint at people that what they have now is not good enough. Consumers may be influenced and form the wrong value that they can possess higher status after purchasing the products. Taking into account the above views, despite the unfavorable effects of the advertisements, the advantages of offering job opportunities and improving foreign trade make advertising more beneficial for society. Therefore, we should encourage the development of advertising, but with proper regulations on misleading propaganda and helping consumers to be wise buyers.