Sentences in Chinese I have tried making sentences and would be grateful if someone could correct them. 1)My eyes are black 我的眼睛黑色的 2)I see with my eyes. 我用眼睛看 3)I speak with my mouth. 我用嘴说

I this sentence in Chinese correct or is it said in another way? I am wearing a coat over(on top of) my sweater 我 穿着一件外套在我的毛衣上

Could some please correct this.It's my first attempt at writing Chinese. (My name is Amit.I am an Indian.I want to learn Chinese.I have used the computer and the cell phone for the past six months to learn Chinese.I want to improve my Chinese.This is the first time I am writing Chinese. 我的名字是Amit。我是印度人。我想学习汉语。我六月用电脑和手机学习了汉语。我想提高我的汉语.这是第一次我在写汉语。