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Please help me for making corrections A National Heritage Place in Myanmar Myanmar is located in South East Asia country, formally known as Burma. Most of people in Burma's religions are Buddhism.So, when you come to Myanmar, you can see a lots of pagodas and temples. In Myanmar, there are lots of national heritage places. Bagan is one of the most famous national heritage place in Myanmar. Bagan, we called it "Heart of Myanmar" , have over 2000 ancient pagodas. Some pagodas are damaged by earthquake. Bagan is a small ancient town. Viewing sunset and sunrise on the top of the temples is one of the famous things to do in Bagan. Seeing the sunrise while riding the hot-air balloons is things to do in Bagan. There are also ancient architecture. People in Bagan are friendly and helpful. There are lots of Burmese restaurants if you want to try Burmese foods. Most of people from other countries come to Myanmar because of Bagan. Weather in Bagan is a little bit hot. In Bagan, there is a tower made with ancient architecture. If you go there, you can see the beautiful view. However, Bagan is a national heritage place in Myanmar and all Burmese people value it.
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Please help me for making corrections Perspective and Outlook in the US Every countries have their own culture and their cultures are different to each other. The US also have their own cultures different from the country I was born. First of all, most of food in the US are made with wheat and corns. Americans eat subs, sandwiches, burgers and fried chicken, Most of Americans also drink coffee too much. Second, when I go to the markets, I see that older people are shopping alone without their family members. That is the main different between my country and the US. In my country, most of the older people don't go outside alone. They always go with their family and they just stay lay in the bed. Third, most of the college students live in the drone while they are attending university and they don't live with their family. My perspective and outlook has change a lot, as I mention since I've arrived to the US. These changes are good because I can learn other culture like American's life style.
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Please help me for making corrections Concerning about Interaction with Students Studying abroad has many difficulties like culture shock, studying styles difference and communication problem with people from different countries. When you come to the US, you will have to face culture shock first because cultures are different in every countries. Every thing is different like greeting style, speaking style and even eating style. In the university, we also may face some difficulties and have concerns about interaction with students. First of all, most of international students concerns about teaching styles and communication styles. International students can't speak English fluently like their native language so that they mostly concern about their communication with other students. Everything is new so they also concern about their new places like room, new food and new campus. They will miss their home and family because they are away from home. So, they may also concern about being home sick and how to solve it. However, there have lots of concern about everything, they may be used to with that later because time will cure their concern and problems. So, they can be part of the university student life happily and they will enjoy their campus life.
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Can you make corrections to my journal, please? A Professional Event Planner I'm interested in managing everything. I want to be an event planner. I want to make other's special days perfect. Becoming an event planner has so many challenges. Planner needs to communicate with customers and they need to do exactly what their customers want. Now I'm trying to participate in other's events by helping what they need. Some people ask what wedding planners are and what they have to do. So, the answer is they have to do everything needed for the event. For instance, a wedding couple hire an event planner, so that the groom and the bride will have nothing to do. An event planner will do everything to arrange a beautiful wedding for them. I want to create wonderful wedding. I also want to plan surprise proposal event because it can make people happy. I want to be an event planner because I just want to make everyone happy by doing my professional career. Therefore, from now to next 5 years, I'll try my best to become a successful event planner in my country.
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