which one is correct I think it would be much better if i am part of the discussion I think it would be much better if i was part of the discussion

sentence correction If we lower the bus pass rate, there will be more people can afford a monthly bus pass, therefore we can make more residents enjoy their lives by using public transit in stead of walking to supermarket and parks.

opinion survey answers correction To whom it may concern I would prefer to keep both print version and online version. I think this is a far better choice for a newspaper publisher than only having a online channel. There are two main reasons that I prefer to keep both version. Firstly, as we all know there are still a lot of people that the only way they can get to know the latest news is newspapers. For instance, there are a lot of seniors they don't know how to use computers, also there are still some people in poverty who can't afford a personal computer, all of them need newspapers. So if we cancel the paper version then how do they get the necessary information in time. Therefore, I believe keep producing both online and paper version can benefit everyone, and make everyone feel included and respected. In addition, when we surfing in the internet and watching online websites, we may immerse ourselves in tons of information and don't know how to chose what we should read next, which consequently changing a delighted reading to a time consuming task. By contrast, newspapers can help us doing kind of screening works, make a more ease and enjoyable readings for us. Thanks for inviting our opinions, I think we should keep the current approach.

email writting correction Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this email about that I have been erroneously charged an extra monthly membership fee $100 on last month bill. Meanwhile, I found my membership card currently can't be used due to your system mis-recording. Last month I went ABC for a 30 days vacation, so before I was leaving I called your customer service line to temporary withdraw my membership from 1,Oct to 30,Oct. As thus I don't need to pay the membership fee during my vocation time. But when I got my last statement yesterday, I noticed that I have still been charged for $100 of last month membership fee. Enclosed please find my passport photocopies including all my travel record last month for your reference. Moreover, when I was going to gym this afternoon, the receptionist said my membership have already been cancelled according to their system record. I feel extremely disappointed about your customer services. I hope you can remove the $100 from my bill and issue a new one by end of this week at the latest, without my having to take any further steps. Also Please reactive my membership card by tomorrow morning to ensure I could attend my Yoga course on time. Regards

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sentence correction I wanted to suggest city administration to enforce some fine to banned people throwing garbage and put a new sign to alert people they are not allowed to throw garbage in the park.

email correction To whom it may concern I am writing this email to register a noise complaint of Rebecca Park. I am living in 5637 Bristol street, Mississauga,ON. My house's backyard is facing the Rebecca Park and recently there are increasing noises at night in the park area. A bunch of students start coming to the park at night to dance,laugh,talk, sing and sometime even play musics from last week. I guess it's because they are currently on their summer holiday so they may have tons of free time at night. However, my occupation is customer service and my working hour is from 6am to 3pm. So I need to sleep at 9pm and get up at 5am to ensure I could begin my work on time and have enough energy to complete my work. Unfortunately the noise caused me wake up a lot at night and I felt pretty tired during my working time. I already tried to talk to those students but no use. I suggest to put a new sign in the park to ban the noise after 8PM. Thereby every one not only me but also a lot of senior people in our neighbourhood can have a good environment to rest. Regards

email correction Hi David I am writing this email about that I would not be able to help to fill in(take over?) receptionist work this noon. I sincerely apologize for not helping you here due to the preparing work of afternoon's presentation. If I had time I would be glad to take it as I always did. As you know, I am currently reviewing and finalizing our annual training plan and need to report it to management team in the cross function meeting at 3PM this afternoon. I was going to collect the trainee list and course preference list from each department heads, then integrate those parts into our training plan. They all promised me to send it out by this noon, so I only can use the limited lunch time to get our report ready. Moreover, I have a 30 minutes lunch meeting with our new hires to quickly go through their job responsibilities and KPIs. So I am fully occupied this noon. Hopefully you could understand. I suggest asking our new interns to fill out this work and take this chance to get more working experience for themselves. I know they just got an on job training by admin department and they already finished their internship on sales department. I thought they could handle enough questions of customer service and product issue. Let me know your thoughts. Thanks and Regards

email correction To whom it may concern I am writing this email about a internet disconnected problem which has been happened from last Monday. I am a new user of your internet service that I purchased your internet service and finished all the equipments setting on 6th Oct. The first two weeks everything goes well, but from August 6 it has been disconnected for several times. Unfortunately, from the last week, it even can't be able to connect to the internet at all. I registered for checking service and had a technician to fixed it this Monday. But now it doesn't work again and it was just two days later after the repair. I run my own online business at home, so internet is playing a vital role in my work. During your disable serving time, I already lost two customer due to unable reply them in time. Not to mention that I can't upload new products to my website and communicate with my supplier to ship my product on time. As a remedy, now I have to change my regular routine to meet the limited internet time and sometimes I have to go to Cafe to use the public wifi. I hope you can send a higher level expert to my house as soon as possible to repair the problem by end of this week at the lasted, without my having to take further steps. My phone number is 124455, My case registering number is 887774. Regards