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please correct my report I am planning to introduce the artwork that I have been studying recently. Because Christmas is in recent days, the report uses a Christmas-inspired design. First of all, let's look at the picture. This is the Eslite bookstore that everyone is familiar with. The lights inside have a unique Hualien atmosphere, which is the clouds floating in the endless blue sky. This light is called a cloud light. The artist who created this light hopes that we will add our own ideas and think about improving the cloud lights during the period. (The production of cloud lights should be synthesized in one go) First of all, we learned about the practice of lights from the teacher. The method is simple, but it's hard to think of, and it's complicated to make. The first step: blowing the balloon, and connecting the blowing port at the bottom of the balloon to the desired shape (note: the cloud does not have a physical shape, but do not destroy the structure of the cloud) The second part: the white paper and the small brush are used to stick the rice paper on the balloon and the whole shape is the first layer; the second layer is made of paper towel, and the white plastic is used to paste the whole shape on the upper layer of the rice paper; the third layer is white. The plastic paper continues to cover the paper towel Part III: After the second step is completely dry, the basic framework is complete. The fourth part joins the light I used Mobius's infinite loop to express the formation of clouds and the circulation of water in nature. As shown in the figure, the ants in the Mobius ring are trapped in an infinite field. Therefore, I added to the cloud lamp, the elements of the water are placed in the bottle in the order of the above, reflecting the concept of evaporation, transpiration, etc. The projection of the spiral with the golden wire around the lamp reflects Mobius, the overall expression of the water cycle and The formation of the cloud proves that art design and science can also be connected. Thank you for listening.
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Correct my diary please Today is a sunny day I spend time on my major class.The sun very hot

make me feel not good,I wear a black shirt in meky mouse

At half past nine I went to a baby house to do some design in light like a cloud

The baby in there were lovely run everywhere ,when I was walking,a boy touch me in back, I told him he was a lovely boy, and he didn't talk anything just smile like a angel ,and then I did my work still 12:00pm

Lunch time we ate something like checken , and many kinds of vegetables .I think it's taste good and I love it ,study in TaiWan is not bad because of the life here not like I live in mainland before, in my

Hometown our life speed quickly ,and everyone want to be more and more harder, but here you can keep slow speed to life ,as a university student I needn't to worried about future , but I worried about future still,how to take part in my hometown's life only a way hard working everwhere .

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correct my diary please When I was a senior high school student,I found a boy like me,do all things in careful way,and want to become stronger , day by day, I told him we can test the same university because of our same hobby in business,so everyday we

Work hard to learn many things like

English mathes Chemical political biology Computer Technology Physics, and we had never give up,

After school we go to the fish shop,go through the fish glass I see a pair of eyes I have never seen, That time I knew I perhaps like him by mistakes,And because of his foot ache we went home by bus .That night I feel not good and told my girlfriend but nothing happen still....

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could you correct my diary thanks New friend

Tonight I have make a new friend ,

a girl younger than me and when she start to talk "你好”I think she Very potential to learn chinese,and a old boy if he can let me called him , I think he is a gentleman in language and want to make friends with me , but time too late I will go sleep.

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could you help me to correct my article? Change my use of inappropriate sentences I'm a student in Donghua international university , I'm confused about future life choices,

When I was a senior high school student my English not bad but still now, I realise my English skill become terrible because of my lazy in learing so I want to save it,

I can speak Chinese ,and I want to help the people who want to learn Chinese ,it's my honour .

I'll po the diary start from my senior high school's stupid things,and hope people helping me in grammars ,please.....

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