Please help me make this sound natural Thank you very much for your time and information. However my visa still hasn't come through, I have bought a plane ticket. And I would arrive on 23 August. I like the idea of talking to you and learning about things before registering and I was searching to know if I could postpone the register for the fall term until I arrive there. I think this is the common way for PhD students over there, but I am not sure if it is okay by the department.

Please help me make this sound natural in a formal way It has been said “Home is where the heart is” and it is especially true for me since I come from an extensive family including my parents and five of my siblings who we really have close relationships and all of them live in my country. In fact, I have no relatives abroad, my whole family lives here and all of our properties are located in Iran. I have lived my entire life with my parents in our house so leaving them for a couple of years is hard as it stands. I love my city and despite the fact that it is a small town, it is a beautiful and great city to live in for me because most of my relatives live there and it has a very friendly environment. Moreover, I already have a lucrative job offer from the Burn and Wound Healing Research center, The Shiraz University of Medical Science that I have been working in for about 4 years, in addition, that I can work here on my own as a physiotherapist and I will never jeopardize this opportunity after graduation. Under no circumstances, I am willing to jettison these opportunities and happy life.

Hereshould I say "are produced " and " are opened" or I should say "were produced" and "were..."? ...So, in his documents he can be “Seyed Akbar Hosseini” or “ Akbar Hosseini”, based on the years, documents are produced or bank accounts are opened.

Do I sound natural and formal in these sentences? As in the birth certificate of my brother, Seyed Akbar, is said the word “Seyed” is added to the beginning of his name. So, in his documents he can be “Seyed Akbar Hosseini” or “ Akbar Hosseini”, based on the years, documents are produced or bank accounts are opened. The same thing is true for my father and the other brother, seyed adel.

Does the following text sound natural? Here I provide you with all sources of my funds. On page 2, you can see the funding letter from Concordia University. In sum, it provides me around $27730 per year. I put my personal Bank Statement on page 7. I cannot assign all of them to my studies because I want to leave my work next month, and I will live on it for a while. Also, I have to deal with all the next expenses using this budget. So, the amount I can spend on my studies is around $25,000. My brothers’ bank statements are on the next pages. Based on my needs, they assigned around $30,000 to my studies; if necessary, I can ask them for more money. My tuition and life expenses in Canada will be around $26,000 every year. I have planned my financial budget somehow I do not get in trouble if the university cannot pay my expenses or tuition for a while.

Does the following sentence sound natural? If not, what is a better way of expressing this idea? 1.A significant advantage of having a large family is that in a difficult situation aids are more likely to come from others. 2.A significant advantage of having a large family is that there are always people who support one in difficult situations.

I need this to be natural and professional However, the university that offered him a position is a small one and all its faculty members have either Master's degrees or doing their Ph.D. , there are some advantages: First, it is close to his parental village. Second, it will provide him with valuable experience and the necessary money to become professional.

I need this to be professional and free of errors. Thanks My love for my family and my passion for math have significantly affected my life. For my entire life, I have lived with or near my large family of eleven siblings and parents. The warm, supportive atmosphere of the family encouraged my siblings to not live far from my home village either, where my parents currently reside too. I have worked as a math teacher for years in Basht, a town around twenty kilometers from the village, even though it is much more lucrative to teach in an urbanized city with my Master's degree. To me, growing up in a big family was not just about being surrounded by enormous love and support, but it was also about making my best lifelong friends. I let my siblings in on any of my little secrets because I knew they would keep loving me under any circumstances. Also, my father is already 68 and my mother is 62. I definitely want to spend more time with them due to their old age. In the pursuit of creating a comfortable life for myself, I sent my resume to some universities close to my parental village, and a university in Basht offered me a position as a math professor, after my graduation from Concordia University. Degrees from Canadian universities are greatly valued in Iran, so following my passion to work as a math professor in a town such as Basht would give me the best possible quality of life.

Please help me make this sound natural and professional Based on PISA report 2015, Canadian educational system is ranked among the best in the world. The Canadian top-ranked universities and the international conferences which are frequently held over there means access to the most brilliant mathematical minds of the world. The sophisticated educational system values creative minds and provides the right conditions for young mathematicians to flourish. Also, Canada is a multicultural society and Canadian universities accept students from all over the world. In a multicultural society, I will be accepted as a foreign student and I would be able to enjoy learning from people and students with different backgrounds which mean to me new interesting perspectives. So after my graduation, I stand a good chance to be highly qualified at my subject. Also, I am interested in learning languages and four years of living in Quebec is an incredible opportunity to learn French and master English.