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A place I travel before Could you help me correct my mistakes?Thanks! The most impressive place I have visited is Disney land. I went there with my family. We were so excited because we saw many Cartoon characters. We took a picture with Goofy. We also saw many magnificent castles and a spectacular parade. We traveled the park as if we were into a fairy tale world. In addition, we enjoyed some entertainment facilities. At the end of that day, we were so delighted and our dogs were barking.
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Transportation Could you help me correct my mistakes?thanks! I definitely have a soft spot for high-speed train. Its head looks like a bullet. When I take a train, I can always set out on time and arrive my destination on time or even early. Instead, when I take a plane, the flight sometimes delays and I feel terrible because my ears pop. I think high-speed train is comfortable and steady. I can put a cup of water on table and the water won’t splash. I can remember clearly that when I first took a train, I was so excited to see what a fast train. Train attendant handed out a box of snack to us and I was so delighted.
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A course I want to take Could you help me correct my mistakes?thanks! The course I want to take is Miss Wang’s badminton course. She was an athlete. She retired from national badminton team and now she is my college’s teacher. I have been in her class before. I think she is the best badminton teacher in my college. But unfortunately, she was not an eligible teacher to launch course because of the new rules which said teachers who want to launch courses should have their own published paper. Miss Wang focus on real sports so she doesn’t have her own paper. I want to take her course because she has the great training method to help us improve. She has the advanced and professional theory. We can heighten our technology after learning from her.
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An interesting experience Could you help me correct my mistakes?thanks! In the national day of 2018, I went to a very beautiful scenic spot with my classmates. Under the hill, there were many people selling fruit. Mango is that city’s famous fruit. Their mango is very huge. I bought a mango and an apple there. They were packed in a plastic bag. And then I climbed the mountain with the plastic bag on my right hand. When we were climbing the mountain, we discussed if we could meet monkeys. We have heard that some monkeys grab tourists’ camera. When we got halfway up the mountain, we took a short break and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. Suddenly a monkey behind me rushed towards my direction and grabbed my plastic bag. It sat on the ground eating the mango calmly. It is so clever that it bit off the skin of the mango and ate the flesh. I was scared and frightened. Fortunately, it didn’t attack me. Meanwhile, I was excited because I saw the monkey eating mango. It’s interesting. All of us took pictures around it.
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night owl Could you help me correct my mistakes?thanks! I would like to be a night owl because I think at midnight the world is very silent. I can concentrate on the things I should do and I am very efficient to accomplish my work. I don’t need to worry I oversleep the next day and it is too late to finish my work. Sometimes I don’t realize my clock rang. Most of the time my roommates heard the clock before I did although the clock is near my ears.
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My favorite sports Could you help me correct my mistakes?thanks! Badminton is my favorite sports among all the popular sports. When I was a child, my father bought me a small racket which is special for kids. My father taught me how to play. Every day after school I played badminton with my parents. When I was in high school, I took part in a badminton competition but I lost very badly. After that, because of my strong interest in badminton, I followed a coach to learn for a short time. When I went to college, I joined in the badminton club and I practiced my skills with my club partner as much as I can. I was so crazy one day. I played badminton when the court was open and I left when the court was close. Due to badminton, I have learned that practice makes perfect and never give up when the situation is terrible because I still have the opportunity to success.
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An ideal house Could you help me correct my mistakes?thanks! I want to live in a big house in the center of big city. There are plenty of sunshine. I can go to the supermarket, restaurant and places of entertainment whenever I want. It is very convenient for my life. In the house, I would like to set one big room for watching movies and one big room for family band. In my spare time I can enjoy the movie as if I were in a movie theater. And I think music is an important thing for my family because it can make us happy and relaxed. There are a big swimming pool and broad courtyard outside the house. There is a saying that “Life lies in movement”. We can have a good time there.
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my favorite food Could you help me correct my mistakes?thanks! One of my favorite food is Niangao, which is a traditional Chinese food which usually served as a kind of snack during the celebration of the Chinese New Year. So, it’s also commonly known as the Chinese New Year Cake. It is a kind of food made from glutinous rice, which feels very smooth to touch before it’s been cooked. It's yellow in appearance. The cooking methods are not very complex. The most common way is to cut it into pieces and steep them into the egg mixture. Finally fry them in the pan. It tastes sweet. My sister and I often eat it as breakfast. Niangao symbolizes the meaning that people can be better in the coming new year. But I eat it simply because it is really tasty.
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Hometown Could you help me correct my mistakes?thanks! I am from shanwei. My hometown is by the sea and is about a 3-hour drive from the capital of Guangdong. In shanwei, there are many tasty snacks and seafood. For example, you can enjoy many kinds of dumplings here. Guangdong is famous for delicious soup and Porridge. I especially like shrimp porridge. My favorite food is Salted fish which only coastal cities have. But I stay in chengdu for 10 months a year so I miss it very much. I think my hometown is a good place to work and live because its air is so clean and the life is less stressful. The famous scenic spot is Lotus Hill which is the highest peak along the east coast of Guangdong. The main senic spots on the mountain include jiming Temple, yunlian Temple and so on. We can have vegetarian food with no meat there. A panoramic view of the city can be seen at the top of the mountain.
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Could you help me correct my mistake?thanks! There is a rabbit, and she is a university professor. I always have to wear a uniform to school, but where she works anything goes. She teaches formulas to the students every day. And she got tired of the campus life. So last year she decided to travel for a short time. Travel can free her from the daily grind. But when to leave was still pending. This idea sometimes distracted her from her work. Recently, she is making her Tourism plan for next month. Unfortunately, the ground sunk suddenly several days ago and was distorted. She was fed up because all her food inventory subsided and they can’t be eaten any more. And there's no rhyme or reason for police convicting her for this accident. Can she travel next month? She just has to sit tight. Only time will tell.
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