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Hi Italki users! Would be immensely grateful if sb could check my IELTS Writing Task 1 response to the question on the pic: The table illustrates the activities that jobless persons in the UK engaged in last year. The information provided is disaggregated by gender and part of the day. Overall, housework, shopping, and job hunting were the most common ways to spend free time, both among men and women, while sports and drinking were the least reported. When looking at women, it is evident that in the morning they were more likely to engage in housework (almost 50%), shopping (nearly a third), and employment search (16%). However, in the second half of the day, females used to visit friends or relatives instead of looking for jobs (17% and 13%, respectively) As for men, in the first half of the day, job hunting proved to be the most frequently performed task (as exemplified by 22%), while shopping and housework made into top-3 with 20% and 19%, respectively. During the day, though, men spent more time watching TV, gardening, visiting friends or relatives, and job hunting, with each of them accounting for just under 15%. Drinking and playing sports were the least common activities among both genders in both parts of the day. Have a nice day😉
27 de mayo de 2024
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Hey! Would be grateful if sb could check my IELTS Writing Task 1 response to the question on the pics: Many thanks in advance, and here is the essay: The line graph provides information about the correlation between age and crime in the UK last year, whereas the pie chart illustrates the disaggregation of crime by type. Overall, youngsters were most likely to commit crimes, unlike people from other age categories. The most common crimes were related to violence, while public order crimes made up the smallest share. The line graph shows that youth aged 12 to 28 years broke the law more often, unlike individuals from other age groups. While the highest number of crimes (almost one million) was committed by people aged 20, children up to 12 years were the least likely to be perpetrators. Moreover, individuals older than 28 years were also less prone to engage in crimes. Regarding the pie chart, violent crimes were the most prevalent, making up almost half of all offences. Public order crimes, however, accounted for only 9%. Property and drug-related crimes had similar levels at just under 25%.
27 de mayo de 2024
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