Aditi
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From my personal experience, I know that underachieving students may have faced negative experiences that impact their self-esteem and motivation. When I was in school, I was a good student until 10th grade, but my grades went down in 11th and 12th. Some of my teachers were not very kind to me and made hurtful comments like "I'm absent-minded" and "I'm not smart enough for science" and "I should have taken commerce." My physics teacher asked me to stand up and answer a question that I didn't know in front of the class, and then he made fun of my pronunciation. The whole class laughed at me. Even years later, I still feel the impact of those experiences and feel scared to speak up in group settings. I feel to help underachieving students, it's very important to be patient, kind, and understanding. We should encourage students for their efforts, even if they haven't achieved the desired result yet, it can motivate them to continue working towards their goals. Noticing any small things they do well, such as paying attention or participating in class, offering extra help, praising their hard work can also help to build their confidence. We need to create a supportive learning environment where they feel safe to ask questions and make mistakes.
31 de mar. de 2023 21:26
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From my personal experience, I know that underachieving students may have faced negative experiences that impact their self-esteem and motivation. When I was in school, I was a good student until 10th grade, but my grades went down in 11th and 12th. Some of my teachers were not very kind to me and made hurtful comments like "I'm absent-minded," "I'm not smart enough for science," and "I should have taken commerce." My physics teacher asked me to stand up and answer a question that I didn't know in front of the class, and then he made fun of my pronunciation. The whole class laughed at me. Even years later, I still feel the impact of those experiences and feel scared to speak up in group settings. In order to help underachieving students, it's important to be patient, kind, and understanding. We should encourage students for their efforts, even if they haven't achieved the desired results yet, as it can motivate them to continue working towards their goals. Noticing any small things they do well, such as paying attention or participating in class, offering extra help, and praising their hard work, can also help build their confidence. We need to create a supportive learning environment where they feel safe to ask questions and make mistakes.
Your text is clear and well-organized, but there are some minor issues with grammar and punctuation. Additionally, some of the phrases could be improved for clarity and precision. For example, "I feel to help underachieving students" can be rephrased to "In my opinion, helping underachieving students requires" for greater clarity. Another suggestion would be to use more specific and concrete examples to illustrate your points. Overall, your writing shows promise, and with some additional practice and refinement, you can further develop your communication skills.
8 de abril de 2023
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From personal experience, I know that underachieving students may have faced negative experiences that impact their self-esteem and motivation. When I was in school, I was a good student until 10th grade, but my grades went down in the 11th and 12th grades. Some of my teachers were not very kind to me and made hurtful comments like "You are absent-minded" and "You are not smart enough for science" and "You should have taken commerce." My physics teacher asked me to stand up and answer a question that I couldn't answer in front of the class, and then he made fun of my pronunciation. The whole class laughed at me. Even years later, I still feel the impact of those experiences and feel scared to speak up in group settings. I that feel to help underachieving students, it's very important to be patient, kind, and understanding. We should encourage students for their efforts, even if they haven't achieved the desired result yet as it can motivate them to continue working towards their goals. Noticing any small things they do well, such as paying attention or participating in class, offering extra help or praising their hard work can also help to build their confidence. We need to create a supportive learning environment where they feel safe to ask questions and make mistakes.
Your grammar is excellent! I just changed a few things to tighten up the language a bit. Note that if you are going to use quotation marks, I think you need the actual quote (i.e. "you are absent-minded"). Hope that helps.
1 de abril de 2023
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