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It's bitter cold today. After heavy snow yesterday, it seems everything is frozen. I had to shovel out the snow around my car and scrub the icy snow on it. So my fingers were freezing. I don't remember when was the last time I felt snow was fun and romantic. Feeling cold is never easy for me since I have past age 30, and sometimes I wish I could live in someplace warm all year long. That must be fun, and who knows if that could change my life? My closet is full of winter clothing-sweaters, coats, etc. Every spring, I have to reorganize my closet and notice there is no more room for them. Well, I apologize that I grumbled about the weather here. I hope everyone would cope well with this winter.
8 de ene. de 2021 4:53
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It's bitterly cold today. After heavy snow yesterday, it seems everything is
frozen. I had to shovel out the snow around my car and scrub off the icy snow on it, so my fingers were freezing. I can’t remember when was the last time that I felt snow
was fun and romantic. Feeling cold is never easy on me ever since I passed age
30, and sometimes I wish I could live in someplace warm all year long. That must
be fun, and who knows if that could change my life? My closet is full of winter
clothing-sweaters, coats, etc. Every spring, I have to reorganize my closet and
notice there is no more room for them. Well, I apologize that I grumbled about
the weather here. I hope everyone would cope well with this winter.
Very good! I only made small changes to sound more like a native English speaker.
8 de enero de 2021
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Competencias lingüísticas
Inglés, Coreano
Idioma de aprendizaje
Inglés
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