Long years dreams. Is the happy feeling gonna last the rest of your life after once you get it? I think it won’t. You may want to find another one. Life is repeating the process.

Busca entre varios profesores de Inglés...

yano yujin

19 de oct. de 2024 3:14

Correcciones · 3

Long years dreams. Is the happy feeling gonna last the rest of your life once you get it? I think it won’t. You may want to find another one. Life is repeating the process. Could also be: 'seek another one' or 'chase another one'. Also, alternatively: 'Long years' yearnings'

I offered a few small suggestions, I didn't want to change too much as it read like poetry, but have instead suggested some alternative word choices at the end.

19 de octubre de 2024

Long time dreams. Is the happy feeling gonna last the rest of your life once you get it? I think it won’t. You may want to find another one. Life is about repeating the process.

19 de octubre de 2024

¿Quieres avanzar más rápido?

¡Únete a esta comunidad de aprendizaje y prueba ejercicios gratuitos!