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Many people would think that teenagers should be given the chance to make amends and have second lives. Because they think when a teenager committed a crime, the teenager should not be the only one to blame, but also his parent and sometimes the society.
Well it is understandable.
But if you put yourself in victim's shoes, it is never too easy to say forgive, especially when it comes to some vicious crimes. The bad result would not change whatever it is caused by a teenager or an adult.
In terms of justice, I support teenagers that commit major crimes should take the same responsibility as an adult. Because it is talking about major crimes, we have no rights to forgive a murder or rapist on behalf of the victims. Showing mercy to criminals can never come first than victims.
7 de jun. de 2024 10:23
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Many people think that teenagers should be given the chance to make amends
and have a second chance. Because they think that when a teenager commits a crime, the
teenager should not be the only one to take the blame, his parents and sometimes even society should also share the blame. Well it is understandable. But if you put yourself in victim's
shoes, it is never too easy to say "forgive," especially when it comes to some
vicious crimes. The bad result(devastating outcome) of a crime would not change whether it is caused by a
teenager or an adult. In terms of justice, I support the view that teenagers who commit major
crimes should take the same responsibility as an adult. Because when talking
about major crimes, we have no right to forgive a murderer or rapist on behalf of
the victims. Showing mercy to criminals should never come at the expense of justice for victims.
It's very well written. Great work! :)
8 de junio de 2024
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July zhang
Competencias lingüísticas
Chino (mandarín), Inglés
Idioma de aprendizaje
Inglés
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