Ok Dolores, here is one: "...BUT the difference between..." in line four. The problem is that it would take a long time to jump from you text, then back to the answer screen, trying to remember what the mistake was, give the correction, back to your photographed text, and so on...😕 What I suggest is that you is type out your text and post it in "Exercise" on the iTalki app. That will make it so much easier for us to correct, AND for you to see the corrections... 😊

in line two, you wrote 'varies places' but it should be ‘VARIOUS places’ varies is a verb and various is an adjective, and since you are describing the places (as different from one another), you must use various. your hand writing is beautiful by the way! well done :)

Great!

China is a vast country with a large population, and many people in various places speak their own dialect. The biggest difference in dialects is the pronunciation, although the difference between vocabulary and grammar may be small. Some dialects, especially those of the North and South of China have many differences, which leads to difficulties in communication. Dialects are considered part of the local culture, but in recent years, the numbers speaking dialects have been decreasing. In order to encourage people to speak the local dialect, some local goverments have taken measures to preserve local cultural heritage, such as school lessons in dialect and broadcasting program in dialect on television and radio.

 china is a vast country with a large popuiation and many people in varies places speak their  own dialects. The biggest difference in dialects is the pronunciation,and the difference  between the vocabulary and the grammar is small. Some dialects, especially those of the Northand South of china have many  differences,Which makes those people who speak different dialects having difficulties in understanding the conversation among other.  The dialects are considered as a part of the local culture,but, in recent years, the population of speaking dialects has been decreasing. In order to encourage people to speak the local dialect,some local goverments have taking measures to preserve the local culture heritage such as opening the leesons of dialect inschool, broading the program of diglect on television and radio.