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Hello. I haven’t go to a part-time job for a month because my limit of earning is barrier because of over working. And I haven’t go to anywhere, so I have been a spare time. I went to my university and went back home every day. It was mostly only this. However there was a thing I realized which is to keep collect lifestyle: to go to bed early and to get up early morning, to walk, to eat three meals a day. My part-time job is at restaurant which open until at lately night. Therefore my life style had been so bad. In addition, I couldn’t realize a matter of course. I have spent a good lifestyle, and kept more positive thinking. I guess it is important to always have fun when I conduct anything. However I’m not able to have fun when I’m bad feeling like less sleeping,hungry and so on. The good lifestyle lead us to a full day! I recommend strongly to walk for about thirty minutes in the morning after waking up soon and before eating a breakfast. It lead to fat burning! Though not everyday, I have done this 3days a week recently. Let’s to do this! Try this and I want you to spend a good lifestyle!
4 de dic. de 2023 6:52
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Hello. I haven’t gone to a part-time job for a month because of the limit of earning. I have been over working. Also, I haven’t gone anywhere, so I have spare time. I go to my university and go back home every day. It was mostly this. However, there was a thing I realized, which is to keep correct lifestyle: to go to bed early and to get up early, to walk, and to eat three meals a day. My part-time job is a restaurant which opens until lately at night. Therefore, my lifestyle had been so bad. In addition, I couldn’t realize a matter of course. (←この文章の意味がよく分からないです。)I have spent a good lifestyle and kept thinking more positively. I guess it is important to always have fun when I conduct anything. However, I’m not able to have fun when I’m feeling bad like when I get less sleep, feel hungry, and so on. The good lifestyle leads us to a full day! I strongly recommend walking for about thirty minutes in the morning soon after waking up and before eating breakfast. It leads to fat burning! Though not everyday, I have done this 3 days a week recently. Let’s do this! Try this and I want you to spend a good lifestyle!
Hello, I am Nami the assistant of this class. Nice writing! You are having such a wonderful lifestyle. My lifestyle right now is horrible, so I might change a few things referring to your writing. I have corrected your writing. Try to double check it before you post it. I think there were few mistakes that you could have found yourself. For example, the spelling of correct. (If you use collect, this means you are gathering something e.g. pokemon cards.) Also, check your past, present, future participles. By doing these two things I think your writing will become more better!
5 de diciembre de 2023
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