I watched biographical movies of Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg many years ago. And, an impression I received from them is that incredible people like Bill and Zuckerburg are inquisitive about something and dedicated to it like they are engrossed in it when they are young.
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I watched biographical movies about Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg many years ago. The impression I got from them is that incredible people like Bill and Zuckerburg are inquisitive about something and dedicated to it, and engrossed in it when they are young.
THe impression I received from THEM -- unclear if "them" refers to the people or the film
You can clarify by just saying "The impression I got was that incredible people..."
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The impression I got from the films is...
The impression I got from listening to these men is...
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I watched the biographical movies of Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg many years ago. And, an impression I got from them is that incredible people like Bill and Zuckerburg were inquisitive about something and dedicated until they were engrossed in it when they were young.
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