hey so this is me trying to improve my English through making sentences with the new words I'm learning:) i guess i want this to become a new habit of mine and I'm gonna start this today
I'll appreciate it if you help me to correct these sentences ~
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These are very colloquial English sentences and would sound good spoken. I’ll correct the grammar as though you intended to write it.
Hey! So, this is me trying to improve my English through (or, “by”) making sentences with the new words I’m learning. I guess I want this to become a new habit of mine and I’m going to start this today.
I’d (not “I’ll”) appreciate it if you’d help me correct these sentences.