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Do you like the spiders? Would you put a spider in your back or in your arm? Me too. I saw one in my small garden, it lives near to several plants but it choose the fucsia. its as minuscule as my little finger, I can hardly see, it's there and it doesn't move, I like it but I don't know if it will grow, I think that it will be call "Peter" marvellous🕷️
5 de feb. de 2021 23:42
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Do you like spiders? Would you put a spider on your back or on your arm? Me
too. I saw one in my small garden, it lives near to several plants but it chooses (“prefers”? Or “has chosen”)
the fuchsia. It’s as minuscule as my little finger, I can hardly see it, it's there
and it doesn't move, I like it but I don't know if it will grow, I think that it
will (should?) be called "Peter" marvellous🕷️
I would suggest changing the last bit to e.g. “should”, because “will” suggests he is going to be named in the future whereas I think you are talking about now. 🙂
If you are going to name it “Peter”, it would probably sound better to use “he” rather than “it”.
www.writersdigest.com/.amp/write-better-fiction/how-to-handle-animal-pronouns-he-she-or-it
6 de febrero de 2021
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