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Hi! Yesterday, I cleaned my room. My room was so messy, so my mother always told me that I should clean my room.
My room is clean now, so I feel very refreshed.
19 de may. de 2023 3:50
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Hi! Yesterday, I cleaned my room. My room was so messy, so my mother always told
me that I should clean my room. My room is clean now, so I feel very refreshed.
To me the key point is to keep coherence in your sentence… what about this paragraph?
I cleaned my room yesterday because it was messy. My mom always say that I should keep my room clean. Then, it is clean! and I feel satisfied.
Tip: by saying that you are refreshed means that your strength is restored. Clearly, you are restored when you rest, wash yourself but not your room
Hope it works!
19 de mayo de 2023
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Chino (mandarín), Inglés, Japonés, Coreano
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