Hi! Is the text correct, thanks!:

Today I went into a place (I don't wanna say the place) but the thing is, when I got out I saw a white van, and that reminded me of something, I've seen that van several times before, in my dreams. Apparently, the van was in the middle of a backroom, because I can't explain why I had the same dream with that van in the background.

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Hi! Is the text correct, thanks!:

Today I went into a place (I don't wanna say the place) but the thing is, when I got out I saw a white van, and that reminded me of something, I've seen that van several times before, in my dreams. Apparently, the van was in the middle of a backroom, because I can't explain why I had the same dream with that van in the background.

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Hey! I won’t correct every little detail, but I can give a general piece of advice. I think the first sentence is too long. You can divide it into two or three more simple sentences. We call this problem a “run-on sentence”