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Taku Kobayashi
【TOPIC】
Some people say that people today should spend less time using the internet. Do you agree with this opinion?
【My Opinion】
No, I disagree with the statement that people today should spend less time using the internet.
I have two reasons.
Firstly, these days the way of communication needs to the internet.
Number of people use LINE and chat.
It is difficult for them to decrease time using the internet.
Secondly, the internet is useful for them.
A lot of people watch TV on the internet also, to get some information.
For the reasons that I mentioned that people would not be able to decrease time using the internet.
20 de ene. de 2024 13:01
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【TOPIC】
Some people say that people today should spend less time using the internet. Do you agree with this opinion?
【My Opinion】
No, I disagree with the statement that people today should spend less time online..
I have two reasons.
Firstly, these days the best way to communicate is on the internet. Many people use it to chat and do other things. It is difficult for them to decrease the time they spend using the internet.
Secondly, the internet is useful . A lot of people watch TV on the internet and also to get information.
For these reasons that I mentioned, I think that most people would not be able to decrease the time they spend online.
21 de enero de 2024
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【TOPIC】
Some people say that people today should spend less time using the internet. Do you agree with this opinion?
【My Opinion】
No, I disagree with the statement that people today should spend less time using the internet.
I have two reasons.
First, these days we depend on the internet for communication.
A number of people use LINE and chat.
It is difficult for them to decrease time using the internet.
Second, the internet is useful for them.
A lot of people watch TV on the internet also, to get some information.
For these reasons, people would not be able to decrease time using the internet.
Well written! Your points can be written multiple ways. What I have suggested is just one way.
21 de enero de 2024
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Taku Kobayashi
Competencias lingüísticas
Inglés, Japonés, Coreano
Idioma de aprendizaje
Inglés, Coreano
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