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In Japan, trains are very crowded both in the morning and at night. Both students and office workers use the train to go to school and work, so it's crowded. I also take the train to go to college every day, but sometimes even if I want to get on, it's crowded and I can't get on. I'm interested in how much trains are used by people in overseas!!🚃
9 de jun. de 2025 10:06
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In Japan, trains are very crowded both in the morning and at night. Both
students and office workers use the train to go to school and work, so it's
crowded. I also take the train to go to college every day, but sometimes even if
I want to get on, it's crowded and I can't get on. I'm interested in how much
trains are used by people in overseas!!🚃
Hi! Great job with your writing. 🌟
Only a few corrections.
"I'm interested in how much
trains are used by people in overseas!!"
✅️ Correction:
"I'm interested in how much
trains are used by people overseas!!"
(No "in" when saying overseas)
📚 Synonyms for "crowded":
▫️Packed
▫️Full
▫️congested
I am from South Africa and we don't use trains for public transport in my country.
- Teacher Dani 🌷
9 de junio de 2025
In Japan, trains are very crowded both in the morning and at night. Students and office workers commute by train, so they are crowded. I also take the train to go to college every day, but sometimes even if I want to get on, it's too crowded and I can't get on. I'm interested in how much trains are used by people abroad.
9 de junio de 2025
In Japan, trains are very crowded both in the morning and at night. Both
students and office workers use the train to go to school and work, so it's
packed. I also take the train to go to college every day, but sometimes, even if
I want to get on. It's full, and I can't get on. I'm interested in how much
trains are used by people overseas!!🚃
9 de junio de 2025
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