I thought you’re pronunciation was very good. It was clear and understandable. You’re grammar was also very clear. There were a few minor things that you could change but overall I don’t think they affected the meaning of what you were trying to get across.

How can you stand it, If I don’t see my brother a day or at least not to talk to him I ll get crazy😂 I believe nuclear family’s members are the most precious people to me, maybe it’s just because I haven’t got engaged or started a family yet, but I am sure It will be the same for all the time😕