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Dear Li Ming
I have just heard that you have been admitted by the university yearning for many years.Congratulations!As one of your family members being proud of you,meanwhile I would love to give you several suggestions on university life.
To begin with,university should be a paradise for the students pursing knowledge.It is essential to cultivate a habit to study instead of being addicted to computer games.In addition,developing good the relationships with roommates, classmates and professors are necessary.Smooth connection can help you own a more healthy life and pure mind.So whenever they are in difficulty,please offer your hands without hesitation.Studying in the university is a progress which can sculpture you better and sharp you wiser.
I really hope you can enjoy you college life.If you need any help or have any further questions,please let me know.
Yours sincerely,
ZhiWei.
25 de nov. de 2023 6:01
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Dear Li Ming I have just heard that you have been admitted by the university you have been
yearning for for many years. Congratulations! As one of your proud family members I would love to give you several suggestions on
university life. To begin with, university should be a paradise for students who are
pursuing knowledge. It is essential to cultivate a serious study habit instead of being
addicted to computer games or other distractions. In addition, developing good relationships with
roommates, classmates and professors is necessary. Cultivating connections can help
you have a healthier lifestyle and clear mind. So whenever they are in
difficulty, please offer your help without hesitation. Studying at university
is a process which can mould you better and sharpen your wisdom. I really hope
you will enjoy your college life. If you need any help or have any further
questions, please let me know. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei.
Some useful ideas.
26 de noviembre de 2023
Dear Li Ming,
I just heard that you have been admitted to the university you have been hoping to attend for many years. Congratulations! As one of your family members, I am proud of you. Meanwhile I would love to give you some suggestions on university life.
To begin with, university should be a paradise for students pursing knowledge. It is essential to cultivate good study habits instead of being addicted to computer games. In addition, developing good relationships with roommates, classmates and professors is necessary. Good connections can help you have a healthier life. So whenever your friends/colleaques are in difficulty, please offer help without hesitation. Studying in the university is a step which can sculpt you into a better person and sharpen your wisdom.
I really hope you enjoy your college life. If you need any help or have any further questions,please let me know.
Yours sincerely,
ZhiWei.
Remember to put a space after punctions, i.e. periods and commas. It's much harder to read without the spaces. YEARNING might be overly dramatic/romantic. PURE MIND seems out of place here - more like they are entering a monastery. Good job!
25 de noviembre de 2023
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Linda kids/adults
Competencias lingüísticas
Chino (mandarín), Chino (cantonés), Inglés, Japonés, Coreano
Idioma de aprendizaje
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