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I went to Australia to see my friends from high school this summer. They live and go to school in Melbourne. It was my first time to go abroad alone, so it was big adventure for me. I had stayed there for 5 days and I visited various places there. For instance, the University of Melbourne, the State Library of Victoria, Melbourne zoo etc. However, the most impressive thing was my friends celebrated my birthday. It was my 20th birthday month, then they decorated a room and prepared cakes and wines surprisingly! I was really happy and excited. My staying in Australia was fun and I felt like want to study English and visit other countries in the world.
9 de oct. de 2023 8:30
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I went to Australia to see my friends from high school this summer. They live
and go to school in Melbourne. It was my first time to go abroad alone, so it
was a big adventure for me. I stayed there for 5 days and I visited various
places there. For instance, the University of Melbourne, the State Library of
Victoria, Melbourne Zoo, etc. However, the most impressive thing was my friends
celebrated my birthday. It was my 20th birthday month, then they decorated a
room and prepared cakes and wines surprisingly! I was really happy and excited.
My stay in Australia was fun and I felt like I wanted to study English and visit
other countries in the world.
9 de octubre de 2023
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I went to Australia to see my friends from high school this summer. They live and go to school in Melbourne. It was my first time GOING abroad alone, so it was A big adventure for me. I stayed there for 5 days and I visited various places there, for example/such as, the University of Melbourne, the State Library of Victoria, Melbourne zoo etc. However, the most impressive thing was that my friends celebrated my birthday. It was my 20th birthday month, then they spruced me by decorating a room and preparing cakes and wine! I was really happy and excited. My staying in Australia was fun and I felt like wanting to study English and visit other countries in the world.
Well done Cherry! A nice piece of writing. I hope my corrections can help you too!
9 de octubre de 2023
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Inglés, Japonés
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