Next comes rope skipping , making up 36% , followed by basketball playing , 24% .(original) Question: Is the original grammatically correct? if wrong, how to correct?

绑德sings

13 de oct. de 2023 13:27

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Usually in formal prose we write out 'percent' or 'per cent' (a little more old-fashioned).

13 de octubre de 2023

The only grammar issue is that you should use a preposition like "with" or "at" between "playing" and "24%" rather than use a comma. The punctuation also has issues. Don't put spaces before commas or periods ("full stops" in British English.)

13 de octubre de 2023

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