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90 day's training: Day 36
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. đ°
1) I watched the German movie Beyond Silence on Friday. One of my German friends gave it me as a Christmas present because it is her favourite movie.
2) It was a story of a girl who's parents were deaf. She got a clarinet from her aunt on her's father's side.
3) She had apparently a talent for playing clarinet but it was difficult to accept about it for her father.
4) He had a big stress since his childhood when his sister played clarinet.
5) The movie described how to grow up the girl with her family. I thought it was good movie.
28 de oct. de 2024 11:41
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Your sentences are mostly clear, but Iâll make some corrections for grammar and clarity. Hereâs a revised version:
1. I watched the German movie Beyond Silence on Friday. One of my German friends gave it to me as a Christmas present because it is her favorite movie.
2. It was the story of a girl whose parents were deaf. She got a clarinet from her aunt on her fatherâs side.
3. She apparently had a talent for playing the clarinet, but it was difficult for her father to accept.
4. He had a lot of stress since childhood when his sister played the clarinet.
5. The movie described how the girl grew up with her family. I thought it was a good movie.
28 de octubre de 2024
90 day's training: Day 36 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in
advance. đ° 1) I watched the German movie Beyond Silence on Friday. One of my
German friends gave it me as a Christmas present because it is her favourite
movie. 2) It was a story of a girl whose parents were deaf. She got a clarinet
from her aunt on her's father's side. 3) She had apparently a talent for playing
clarinet but it was difficult for her father to accept. 4) He had felt
stress since his childhood when his sister played the clarinet. 5) The movie
described how the girl grew up in such a family. I thought it was good movie.
28 de octubre de 2024
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