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All of us sometimes feel like we're stuck. We doubt our ability to make desicions that can change our lives, open a new chapter in our life books or simply step into an independent life. But you need to remember: if a bird with sound wings is kept in a cage for a long time, how would it know it can fly? You still have your wings, and if it seems like you're stuck, spread your wings. A little bit of effort - and see you've just flown over the wall.
23 de mar. de 2025 10:20
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All of us sometimes feel stuck. We doubt our ability to make decisions that can change our lives, open a new chapter in our life stories, or simply step into independence. But remember: if a bird with strong wings is kept in a cage for a long time, how would it know it can fly? You still have your wings, and if you feel stuck, spread them. A little effort—and suddenly, you’ve flown over the wall.
1. “Feel like we’re stuck” → “Feel stuck”: More concise and natural.
2. “Desicions” → “Decisions”: Spelling correction.
3. “Life books” → “Life stories”: “Life stories” is a more natural phrase in English.
4. “A little bit of effort - and see you’ve just flown” → “A little effort—and suddenly, you’ve flown”:
• “A little effort” is more natural.
• The dash should be an em dash (—) for proper punctuation.
• “See you’ve just flown” was adjusted to sound smoother.
If you’d like to express your thoughts more fluently and naturally in English, I’d be happy to help! Book a conversation lesson with me to practice.
23 de marzo de 2025
All of us sometimes feel like we're stuck. We doubt our ability to make
desicions that can change our lives, open a new chapter in our life books or
simply step into an independent life. But you need to remember: if a bird with
sound wings is kept in a cage for a long time, how would it know it can fly? You
still have your wings, and if it seems like you're stuck, spread your wings. A
little bit of effort - and see you've just flown over the wall.
Hey Mira. Well done, another good translation
23 de marzo de 2025
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