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Hi! This Monday, I was so sleepy. I fell asleep in my bed when I got home. I forgot to keep on the heater. Next morning, I felt uncomfortable in my throat. At the time, I thought it is no problem so, I went to school. But it was not feeling well. As soon as I arrived home, I majored my temperature. My temperature was 37.8 degrees. I was shocking. So, I quickly changed my warming clothes and took a medicine. Next, I had to make a dinner. I want to not make it long time, I searched recipes that can make easily menu. I made Samgyetang soup with rice cooker. Samgyetang soup is a Korean food that includes a lot of ginger. The aroma of the chicken and the strong, medicinal ginger quickly filled the kitchen. Sipping that piping hot, savory broth was incredibly comforting; it felt like medicine, warmth, and dinner all in one bowl, finally chasing away the chill that had settled deep in my bones. After dinner, I watched a movie in my bed. Recently, I had no time to watch a movie so, I was a little happy that I could watch it. Now, I am just praying for getting better.
18 de nov. de 2025 16:20
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Hi! On Monday, I was so sleepy. I fell asleep on my bed when I got home. I forgot to switch the heater. on and the next morning, my throat felt uncomfortable/dry/scratchy . At the time, I didn't think it was a problem so, I went to school. But it was not feeling well. As soon as I arrived home, I took my temperature, it was 37.8 degrees. I was shocked. So, I quickly changed into warm clothes and took some medicine. Next, I had to make dinner. I didn't want to cook for long so I searched for easy, quick recipes t. I made Samgyetang soup in the rice cooker. Samgyetang soup is a Koreandish that includes a lot of ginger. The aroma of the chicken and the strong, medicinal ginger quickly filled the kitchen. Sipping that piping hot, savory broth was incredibly comforting; it felt like medicine, warmth, and dinner all in one bowl, finally chasing away the chill that had settled deep in my bones. After dinner, I watched a movie from my bed. Recently, I haven't had time to watch a movie so, I was pleased to be able to do it. Now, I am just praying that I get better.
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Hi! This Monday, I was so sleepy. I fell asleep in my bed when I got home. I
forgot to keep on the heater. Next morning, I had a sore throat.
At the time, I thought it was fine, so I went to school. However, I was not
feeling well. As soon as I arrived home, I took my temperature. My
temperature was 37.8 degrees. I was shocked, so I quickly changed into my warm
clothes and took medicine. Next, I had to make dinner. I did not want it to take a long time, so I searched for easy recipes. I made Samgyetang soup with a rice cooker. Samgyetang soup is a Korean food that includes a lot of
ginger. The aroma of the chicken and the strong, medicinal ginger quickly filled
the kitchen. Sipping that piping hot, savory broth was incredibly comforting; it
felt like medicine, warmth, and dinner all in one bowl, finally chasing away the
chill that had settled deep in my bones. After dinner, I watched a movie in my
bed. Recently, I have had no time to watch a movie so, I was a little happy that I
could watch it. Now, I am just praying to get better.
Great job! Most of the corrections were about having the verb tenses agree within the sentences.
18 de nov. de 2025 16:56
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