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One years ago, I started to do yoga and meditation because my doctor adviced me to practice them so I decided to do step by step . I've always worked in kitchens so I've felt much stress and anxiety .This was the reason why I wanted to get more calm and control on my emotions. It was one of the best decision that I've took in my life .
10 de may. de 2021 18:14
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One year ago, I started to do yoga and meditation because my doctor advised me to practice them so I decided to do this step by step . I've always worked in kitchens so I've felt very stressed and anxious. This was the reason why I wanted to become calmer and take control of my emotions. It was one of the best decisions that I've made in my life .
Overall, this is very well-written. Your structure is great and your choice of vocabulary is appropriate for the topic. A few spelling errors and some phrases seem a bit awkward but you communicate your story very well otherwise!
10 de mayo de 2021
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