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What is currently preventing you from being your best self (if any)? (150 words)
Procrastination is one of the flaws that has kept me from being the greatest version of myself.
When I have a lot of work to accomplish, I often put off tasks till the last minute of execution. I usually claim that I "do better" when I procrastinate and "work best" under pressure. But this bad habit had come back to bite me. A few years ago, I took an entrance exam for a prestigious high school for gifted students. As the exam approached, I grew increasingly anxious and stressed, and I had to pull several all-nighters. Finally, I failed the test and was unable to enroll as a student at the institution of my dream. I was very frustrated, and I blamed myself for the bad results I got. This has taught me a painful lesson and now, I am trying my best to avoid procrastinating.
6 de oct. de 2021 6:36
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Can you help me to improve my essay
What is currently preventing you from being your best self (if any)? (150 words)
Procrastination is one of the flaws that has kept me from being the greatest version of myself.
When I have a lot of work to accomplish, I often put off tasks till the last minute. I usually claim that I "do better" when I procrastinate and "work best" under pressure. But this bad habit has come back to bite me. A few years ago, I took an entrance exam for a prestigious high school for gifted students. As the exam approached, I grew increasingly anxious and stressed, and I had to pull several all-nighters. Finally, I failed the test and was unable to enroll as a student at the institution of my dream. I was very frustrated, and I blamed myself for the bad results I got. This has taught me a painful lesson and now, I am trying my best to avoid procrastinating.
Great job - this is very well written. I understand, I procrastinate too.
6 de octubre de 2021
Can you help me to improve my essay
What is currently preventing you from being your best self (if any)? (150 words)
Procrastination is one of the flaws that has kept me from being the greatest version of myself.
When I have a lot of work to accomplish, I often put off tasks till the last minute of execution. I usually claim that I "do better" when I procrastinate and "work best" under pressure. But this bad habit often comes back at me. A few years ago, I took an entrance exam for a prestigious high school for gifted students. As the exam approached, I grew increasingly anxious and stressed, and I had to pull several all-nighters. Finally, I failed the test and was unable to enroll as a student at the institution of my dream. I was very frustrated, and I blamed myself for the bad results I got. This has taught me a painful lesson and now, I am trying my best to avoid procrastinating.
Your english writing is pretty good. Sorry to hear about your procrastination problem. Hope you can find a solution for it. By the way, I really love Vietnamese music. I don't know if you know the singer called "Min". She is my favourite. If you have any song recommendations for me... don't hesitate.
6 de octubre de 2021
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