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Yesterday, after work, I went drinking with my friends from my part-time job. One of them had already been drinking, so they were very drunk, but we gave them beer and highballs. The pickles and miso soup we had while drinking were very delicious and comforting. The group was a little different from our usual members, but it was fresh and fun. Recently, I have been drinking with people from my part-time job more often, so I feel like I have become a little better at drinking alcohol. After drinking, we went to play darts, as usual. I was not very good at it, but playing darts with everyone was really fun. One of my friends, who had already been drinking at a few places, threw up as soon as we got to the darts place. I was also very drunk, but for some reason, when someone throws up, I quickly become sober. So, yesterday, I ended up taking care of my friend again. Today, I have work from 2 p.m., and I am going drinking again after that. I’m so excited!!!
25 de jul. de 2026 14:20
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Yesterday, after work, I went out for drinks with my friends from my part-time job. One of them had already been drinking, so they were very drunk, but we still gave them beer and highballs. The pickles and miso soup we had while drinking were delicious and very comforting. The group was a little different from our usual one, but it was a nice change, and we had a lot of fun. Recently, I’ve been drinking with people from my part-time job more often, so I feel like I’ve become a little better at drinking alcohol. After drinking, we went to play darts, as usual. I’m not very good at darts, but playing with everyone was really fun. One of my friends, who had already been drinking at a few different places, threw up as soon as we arrived at the darts venue. I was also very drunk, but for some reason, whenever someone throws up, I sober up very quickly. So, yesterday, I ended up taking care of my friend again. Today, I have work from 2 p.m., and I’m going out for drinks again afterwards. I’m so excited!
Level: C1+. This is a lively and engaging piece of writing. You tell the story naturally, include humour, and keep the reader interested from beginning to end. Your grammar is consistently strong, and the corrections were mainly about using more idiomatic expressions that native speakers would naturally choose. Excellent work! 😊
25 de jul. de 2026 16:32
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